**Review #1**

[Site] -- Sailor Senshi Shrines

[Email] -- Heather

[Overall Score] -- *3/4

::Comments - Mistress Meatball::

[Content] -- *

Simply put, and not to drag this out and waste even more of my time, the site has NO content what so ever. It's just random profiles riddled with inaccurate information and slopped messily onto one page that looks like an excuse to just claim you have a website. Random, horribly placed pictures do not substitute for content.

[Correctness] -- **

Your information seems to be either correct, or disgustingly false. The information, on certain profile pages, that are correct, seem to have been taken from other websites and just pasted onto yours. Take, for example, the "Sailor Moon" page. Compared to your other profile pages, the grammar and information seems flawless. Your sentence structuring is entirely different. It is to my belief you did not write the Sailor Moon info at all. Your information is quite incomplete. Jupiter's and Sailor Moon's page have the most information on them. The other pages, I'm quite afraid to say are bare, and oozing with wrong information. I am not sure where you based your assumptions from, but they are entirely wrong. You claim that Greg, on Mercury's page, is King Mercury. There is no such character as King Mercury. Check your information. I don't want to go into all the mistakes you made.

[Grammar] -- **

It's atrocious. My 10-year-old brother can spell better than you. The only advice I can offer: invest in a dictionary.

[Beauty] -- *

Obviously a page builder site, with monstrous backgrounds. There is no organization to the layout at all.

[Originality] --

There is nothing original to the site at all. It's just a random site that was thrown together with the minimal, most miniscule amount of effort I have ever seen. And in my opinion, it is a waste of cyber space. It's the same copy and pasted information used on every site out there.

[Overall] -- * 1/2

Your site is dedicated to those who love the Sailor Senshi? I'm appalled that such a malformation is dedicated to me! Your layout is poor, and it seems you just have random effects for the heck of it-- such as the floating Pegasus on your main page. The midi's do nothing but annoy. Having different midi's on each page is distracting. The site lacks organization, creativity, and disgraces the Anime that is Sailor Moon. Thank you for wasting my time!

::Comments - Fire Woman::

[Content] -- **

All right, this page (I dare not call it a site because there is so little content to it) only has a few "profiles" of some Senshi, there's not even a Venus page when there's a Pluto page. Also, some of the pages of the Senshi, like Pluto and Mars' pages, only have two sentences of information, really. I gave one more star more than Meatball because she made the very small effort of putting a few pictures on the page.

[Correctness] -- *

Umm, there's not even that much information on there to be graded for correctness of the content... but what I found just completely horrible was this sentence "She is inlove with King Mercury, otherwise known as Greg." May I ask so kindly who the hell is King Mercury? Neither does she mention of any King Mercury in the anime or the manga, and Greg does not have ANYTHING to do with the planet Mercury. Need I say more?

[Grammar] -- **

Well, just as Meatball has said, some info on some of the pages seems flawless, but on other's it's disgusting. Like for instance, who is "Darean"?? It's either Darien or Tuxedo Mask, but in Japanese it's Mamoru Chiba or Tuxedo Kamen. There is no Darean, and therefor I know that you have not been to many sources for background information on the series before you made this "page" that you call a website.

[Beauty] -- *

There is no organization of content on ANY of the pages, and the backgrounds are pitiful and sometimes distractng. Also, the pictures aren't thumbnailed or text linked at all! I can not stand that! I was also generous in this rating, I shouldn't have given anything for this one...

[Originality] -- *

There is no originality at all, I can also tell that she stole pictures from other sites, like the 404 file not found Mercury pic, and the Transparent Gif Zone Mars pic. I do not tolerate people who steal pictures from other's sites, so you had better give credit to those sites, or you must take them down... OR ELSE!!! HAHAHAHA!! ^^

[Overall] -- **

I'm amazed that she even dared to get her page reviewed by us. I'll give a small piece of advice - please research more on sailor moon fansites before doing anything else to the page, because you need some serious site building skills. Also, look into HTML coding, it's actually easier than you think. Now, please take those awful pics down, get a few less annoying midi's, and give your "site" a name, and it'll be a lot better! Then maybe if you come back in maybe a month with a lot of revising and HTML, then maybe I'll by then be able to accept your dedication to me, a very loyal fan of Sailor Moon...

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